r/printSF • u/AChocolateHouse • 2h ago
Recently finished A Fire Upon the Deep...decent book, glad I read it, but mixed feelings.
This 'space opera' like novel is often cited as one of the best scifi has to offer... (Spoiler free, spoilers are marked and in tags)
Warning: Do not pick this up and start reading assuming it'll be an epic space opera. The summary is very misleading in the sense that a huge amount of the chapters revolve around a fairly dull, medieval-like world that is practically a fantasy novel.
I felt this had ingredients of a superb novel in the making, but ultimately fell short. This book is clearly flawed. Yet it's one of those books you like anyway by the time you're through. Certain characters and concepts grow on you. At the same time, this whole book felt like a first draft - as if it was missing things.
And man, some sections really dragged on and on. The first 100 pages had no need to be disorienting at all. The author should've defined things more clearly. I honestly would've put this book down if I didn't look up a basic context of what was happening when we are first introduced to the Tines in the beginning. Other entire chapters later on also dragged quite badly for me.
Furthermore, I think Vinge is not a bad writer - as some who hate AFUTD claim - but he's also not a superb one. He clearly had a vision writing this, and I can follow that vision. But he didn't flesh that vision out enough. He also phrases things confusingly sometimes and has poor word choice, slowing down the reading flow.
There's so many choices the author made that had me go..."really? As a writer, what were you even thinking?"
Could've been much more interesting. But overall, I'm glad I read it...I got something out of the plot, and think it has value. I have to admit the overall effect was good after I finished it.
One criticism of many I have is that:
With the Tines' world, Vinge seems to just assume that the medieval mind is necessarily primitive and their world just has to be dull. On the contrary, medieval-like societies are often very interesting...Where were the rich settings and daily life of this medieval world? The history and myths of the Tines? One huge oversight: The Tines don't even have a religion.
Another one:
A big, big criticism I have...how do you make The Blight be the villain and point of the entire plot, but then not really give them ANY real characterization, no backstory, no nothing? All that happened was we saw a human representative speak as the Blight early on, on a screen, and that was it. Despite the Blight's destruction, it felt hollow as a main enemy...there needed to be more. We needed to see its destruction. The destruction of Relay was a good start, but...you needed more than that...